Stolen fire

sorenbarrett

 

A heartless man

fire built of borrowed fuel

my pleasure burned bright

with other's light

 

Pieces of broken trust

stolen dreams

flame of false warmth

becoming only smoke

 

  • Author: sorenbarrett (Offline Offline)
  • Published: June 11th, 2024 05:20
  • Category: Unclassified
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  • orchidee

    Good write SB.

    • sorenbarrett

      Thanks Orchi I appreciate the review

    • Goldfinch60

      Thought provoking words soren.

      Andy

      • sorenbarrett

        Thank you Andy for the read and comment. It is always appreciated.

      • Teddy.15

        So very powerful 🔥 makes one reflect deeply. Kudos 🌹

        • sorenbarrett

          Thanks Teddy for the read. Reflection is a good thing. It allows us to see our own defects. Thanks so much for the review and comment friend.

        • Cassie58

          A poem which delivers a very powerful portrait of a man who lacks a heart. An excellent write Soren.

          • sorenbarrett

            Thanks Cassie I appreciate your review and comment. Yes heartless is something I see more and more of.



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