My Raven's back
tonight he stayed
he stayed with me
through my dismay
I never knew my tears could fall
eyeballs swollen
dusk till dawn
I asked him why
why, do you stay?
softly gently
he, did say
you're weak and tired
you're lost in grief
I'll stay with you
this moment brief…
and he did.
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Author:
Teddy.15 (
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- Comment from author about the poem: From my Raven Collection.
- Category: Reflection
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Comments5
Again reminiscent of Poe but this time even more.
"I asked him why
why, do you stay?
softly gently
he, did say"
Something about the rhythm and wording of this part left me with Poe. The rhyme and rhythm of this poem was so gratifying. Lovely!!
Wow, your words are the very greatest of compliments to my very own Raven poem inspired by Poe, thank you from the bottom of my heart dear sorrenbarret 🌹
A Raven that offers solace when needed. Beautiful thoughts Teddy and your lines inspired by that great poet Poe. Love the posted image. Have a good Thursday. 🌹
I absolutely love (The Raven) Edgar Allen Poe it's one of the poems that truly speaks to me, I seem to have acquired my own, he is my messenger and the one who helps my grief, thank you dear Cassie. 🌹
Beautiful Teddy. The Raven was right on time.
My dear Thomas, how did you know. Absolutely my dear friend. Thank you. 🌹
beautiful indeed Teddy.
My dearest Melvin, thank you dear friend. 🌹
Your Raven seems to have become an Angel in your life Teddy.
Andy
What a gorgeous thing to say dear Andy, he may have his own book one day. Thank you ❤️
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