Better Life Senryu.

Goldfinch60



 

As I live each day

The true wonder of my life

Is always better.

  • Author: Goldfinch60 (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: June 18th, 2024 01:27
  • Comment from author about the poem: Each day is wonderful.
  • Category: Haiku
  • Views: 42
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  • orchidee

    Glad someone's having a fine life.
    I can't say I am, married to KP! heehee.

    • Goldfinch60

      Thanks Orchi.

      You never know it may improve in time.LOL

      Andy

    • Teddy.15

      Optimism at its finest in a senryu 🌹

      • Goldfinch60

        So kind Teddy, thank you.

        Andy

      • sorenbarrett

        This view and belief keeps one eternally young. Great senryu

        • Goldfinch60

          So true soren, thank you.

          Andy

        • Jerry Reynolds

          Well said, Andy.

          • Goldfinch60

            Thank you Jerry.

            Andy

          • Cassie58

            A very positive message here, Andy. Enjoyed the haiku. Have a lovely Tuesday. Really like your choice of music.

            • Goldfinch60

              Much appreciated Cassie.
              Music has been with me all my life.

              Andy

            • Tom Dylan

              Nailed it, Andy. Completely agree.

              • Goldfinch60

                Thank you Tom, much appreciated.

                Andy

              • John Prophet

                Huge Denver fan. Life, an interesting concept. Nice work.

                • Goldfinch60

                  Thank you John,

                  I too like John Denver. Many years ago in an office where I worked a colleague and I used to whistle Annie's Song in harmony.

                  Andy

                • 2781

                  That's what I am talking about.

                  • Goldfinch60

                    Thank you 2781.

                    Andy

                  • Neville


                    now what could be better than that eh'

                    • Goldfinch60

                      Very true Neville.

                      Andy.

                    • Thomas W Case

                      Isn't it wonderful?

                      • Goldfinch60

                        It surely is Thomas, thank you.

                        Andy



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