Redemption call

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You can hear it

On the streets 

In the halls 

High on the mountain 

Redemption calls...

 

Woven in lyrics 

Slipped into songs...

 

Not in the headlights 

 

Not in the throng..

 

Darkness covers..

 

Cast in the light...

 

Sparks from the flame

 

Hiding  his might...

 

Eternity calling

 

Theirs from the start

 

 

Redemption call 

 

A work of art...

 

 

 

  • Author: Valiantstar (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: June 19th, 2024 03:41
  • Category: Unclassified
  • Views: 30
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Comments8

  • Alan R

    Simple yet profound!

  • 2781

    I am definitely the first!

  • sorenbarrett

    Redemption to buy back. A ransom paid. The question being how was it lost, stolen or kidnaped?

  • 2781

    Much more subtle, Lie suspect.

  • Thomas W Case

    Beautiful.

  • orchidee

    Good write 2.

  • Goldfinch60

    May we all go on to eternity 2781.

    Andy

  • Thad Wilk

    A captivating
    poem indeed! 👍
    Great rhyme
    and flow,
    way to go.
    Thanks for
    sharing
    my pleasure
    to read!
    Best regards, ✌️
    Thad

    • 2781

      Thank you, the pleasure is mostly mine!

      • Thad Wilk

        I kin tell! 'grin'



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