Reflecting in The Shower

Teddy.15

 

Life has a cruel way

of taking us to places

we never wanted nor wished to be

but then

just then, in a flash

it can also take us

to places

that we could only ever have dreamed of.

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  • Thomas W Case

    Beautiful and a bit spicy. Lol.

    • Teddy.15

      Ah yes, well spotted a poem produced under the shower lol I need to get some sort of waterproof system in there 🤣 thank you dear Thomas. 🌹

    • MLHnow

      Thanks for the ever true reminder

      • Teddy.15

        Thank you so much, we all need this reminder from time to time. 🌹

      • Goldfinch60

        So very true Teddy but I am sure that like me you have been to more places of enjoyment than those we don't enjoy.

        Andy

        • Teddy.15

          Thank you dear Andy. 🌹

        • Cassie58

          Quiet moments in the shower. Memories flashing past in a hurry. Some good, some not so. A relatable poem Teddy. Love your posted image. Have a beautiful day. 🌹

          • Teddy.15

            Thank you dear Cassie, often of late I have found my inspiration in the shower, not the easiest of places to jott stuff down, happy happy Friday 🌹

          • sorenbarrett

            Love the positive and negative aspects of this reflection. And in the word reflection there is the implied thought that there are different things to reflect on or it would not occur. We should always be aware that out of every crisis there appears an opportunity. Nicelly done Teddy

            • Teddy.15

              Thank you so much dear sorrenbarret 🌹

            • Doggerel Dave

              Almost didn't catch this one - you were too slippery all soaped up like that, Teddy......... oh dear!
              Glad I didn't - so simple but true, you would have had, once formed, no trouble in remembering it once you were dried, dressed and respectable once more.... oh dear!!!

              • Teddy.15

                lol 🤣 Thank you dear Dave, that's a wonderful response. I can tell you I had soap in my eyes but I got it written down lol🌹

              • Poetic Dan

                As look out my hospital window I hear that my friend and dream to get back to my family and bed.

                • Teddy.15

                  You will dear Dan, they need you too. No better place than where you are at this times, take it slow and think positive vibes always. Biggest of hugs. 🌹

                • Thomas W Case

                  I love the ambiguity of this, sweet Teddy.

                  • Teddy.15

                    Thank you so much dearest Thomas once again, such a kind thing to say about my work and it's very true too. 🌹



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