Curtains Calling
I can almost see the ocean
from her bedroom window
the wind is blowing a gale
and the curtains are dancing ..
I am here only because
of my love for beauty
and my eyes are drawn again
to those dancing curtains ..
This morning, they appear
even more beautiful
than the lady busy showering
after last night’s exertions ..
I have another ladies number
I keep for emergencies
she is more a friend these days
and does not believe in curtains ..
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Author:
Neville (
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- Comment from author about the poem: this is the last scribble in my next anthology .. and should be in print from around July or August if anyone is interested .. it is called The Making of A Broken Man .. monies raised this time will be split between brain tumour and breast cancer charities .. mental health shall have to wait a while .. I shall be away for some time from now .. but be sure, I will return any reviews etc upon my eventual return .. In the meantime, I wish you all Peace, Love and All Good Things, Neville 🤍
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Comments11
Wonderful imagery, Neville. I can almost see the curtains swaying.
And good luck with everything, mate, hope you guys are okay. Take care, Tom.
Cheers Tom, so very muchly appreciated kind sir .. and please excuse my late response .. Neville
Good write N.
Thank you Orchidee .. Neville
bon voyage
The break has done me the world of good.
Welcome back
The eyes are always drawn to movement, ever searching. Beautiful! Be safe my friend, until you return wishing you all good things.
Bless you Bella .. it is good to be back even though I quite enjoyed my Caribbean cruise .. the beast Beryl followed us closely until we shook her off before we hit St' Maarten .. Kindest of sentiments reciprocated my friend .. Neville
and this is my plea for a curtain call ASAP, Neville.
Wot no timing at all re your return?
Oops, an unfortunate slip up and most uncharacteristic of me .. but am now most recently returned .. Neville
I had a terrible feeling in my water that we (legit. usage) would not see you for a veeeeery loooong tiiiime..... Glad to welcome you back.
Thank you Dave .. N 🙂
I hope that emergency does not happen too often Neville.
Andy
Thanks for your concern oh' golden one .. but fortunately, I seem remarkably non accident prone .. I even managed to dodge Beryl mid Caribbean so consider my self most fortunate .. Neville
A wonderfully
captivating and
eye pleasing write! 👀
Thanks for sharing
a treat to recite!! 😎
Best regards ✌️ Thad
I feel very spoilt this fine mane .. bless you sir Thad .. AGT's to you, your pen & yours .. Neville
Always a pleasure to read, keep sailing my friend.
Hiya Dan .. as you will no doubt have guessed, I have been away and resting up for a while in the Caribbean but am now back at work and of course re-charged and raring to go ... back again that is .. Hope you are good my friend and thanks for being there, here n wherever .. Neville
Brilliant maybe one day I'll be there too! Always a pleasure and glad your refreshed and ready for the crazy times we are in!
Impressed once again! You have a beautiful way with words!
I hope you have a good time wherever you are going!
You really are so very kind my friend .. Not long home and yes, I feel a whole lot better having had some time to re-charge my batteries in the Caribbean .. Kindest of regards & many thanks, Neville
Beautiful aesthetics in all you do-nothing more beautiful than dancing curtains and your cause-give more info on your publication please…
Dear Parisab,
I really cant thank you enough for your visit, for your positive & insightful review and of course, for your interest in my forthcoming anthology .. I shall provide additional details in a private message shortly.
Many of my most sincerest thanks to you again my friend .. Neville 🙂
Tremendous work, my friend.
Thank you Thomas, much appreciated my friend .. Neville
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