Dreams Worth Gold

Teddy.15

 
Did I ever tell you
it's in my semi-conscious 
that I meet them?
not all together,
they visit one bye one
a very private meeting, if you will
 
last night it was of Lee
I dreamt 
he had never died at all
It was all just a big mistake
he was alive and smiling at me 
Just like
he always used to do 
 
and on awakening 
from my most
cheerful slumberbash
I Realised 
it was just the intervention 
of the most kindest side
of my semi-conscious state
 
that at least
let me see him once again
I held my big brothers hand
and that for me is
a dream worth gold.  
 


 
 
 
  • Author: Teddy.15 (Offline Offline)
  • Published: June 22nd, 2024 12:13
  • Comment from author about the poem: It's the first time I've ever written his name into my poem.
  • Category: Reflection
  • Views: 30
  • User favorite of this poem: Accidental Poet.
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Comments5

  • Thomas W Case

    Tremendous work. So much soul.

    • Teddy.15

      Thank you so much dear Thomas, his second name was Thomas, after both my grandad's I've never written his name in my poems before. Progress right? It only took 26 years. 🌹

      • Thomas W Case

        I'm so sorry for your loss. Death sucks.

      • Accidental Poet

        Visits from loved ones always come with love. Excellently penned Teddy. 🌹👍

        • Teddy.15

          We are both blesses dearest A.P that's for sure, they always come with joy.thank you my dear friend. 🌹

          • Accidental Poet

            🫂

          • Goldfinch60

            Wonderful emotive words Teddy, he will always be with you.

            Andy

            • Teddy.15

              Thank you dear Andy, sometimes I can really feel it too. Especially when I first moved to Italy. 🌹 We were only a year apart in age. 🤗

            • aDarkerMind

              heart and soul from start to finish Teddy...
              a truely wonderfully written work of art.

              • Teddy.15

                Thank you dearest Melvin, that means so much coming from you. Healing forever. 🌹

              • sorenbarrett

                Dreams can be so kind. Such a feeling of loss and still a feeling of joy at reunion. Gold indeed.

                • Teddy.15

                  Thank you so much for your kind words dear sorrenbarret 🌹



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