This may feel like the thinnest of threads but I ain't letting go to pay that last debt
Life is not ready for me to fade, I have to many ripples of change to create.
I know I spent my younger days racing through but now I'm ready to just plod along whistling a tune.
No longer will I stress over things I can't control, letting go of problems I'm unable to solve.
This breeze I'll manifest with my energy flow to now travel through my life with minimal pressure to do nothing but glow.
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Poetic Dan (
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- Comment from author about the poem: Thanks for the inspiration Peto
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It's you who is the inspiration Dan
So positive despite everything you got going on
Great to see you still here
Consistently impressive
Top man
This was yesterday but today is dark I am honestly losing the belief that I'm going to last. I've lost it with ever doctor I've seen as I honestly feel unheard and negligent all weekend! They don't even read the paper work that said I was in 3 years ago.... like wtf!
Thanks for listening my friend and helping keep my spirit up
Had many a dark day Dan
And a few to come yet no doubt
The good ones with the new born and some old friends will get you there
Str8 from hell to heaven
If anyone is capable... it's you
My man. Thank you
Wonderful lines Dan and may your easier way of life bring love, joy and wonder to you.
Any
Thank you my friend just be able to walk without pain would be enough 🙏
Always stay strong dear Dan, get your strength your children are waiting for you. Life has a way of bringing us down and pulling us back up, you have the stamina to get back up always. ❤️
With poetic friends like you my spirit will always be strong! We need No image to see where friendly faces belong or the smile that keeps us singing those song's.
Thank you as ever for your caring vibration x
this poem truly helped me since i have been having some rough days ! i wish you the best Dan in whatever troubles you !
That is a true honor my friend. Keep up the write... do what you got to do...remember your worth every inch of it! Even more so for how extra proud you must made me feel and I promise you what brought me to this point was not wanting to continue the fight called life....
But we all know! It's how many times you get back up!
Appreciate your time
Much peace and respect
Exactly! We must congratulate ourselves every baby step we take and be aware that failure is part of life ( and for a reason) this life is worth living and we owe it to ourselves to fight every day because we are all strong enough to overcome every difficulty along with the help of our good Lord 💖Thank you for your kind words and for spreading awareness for our mental health!
Stay blessed my friend
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