Dogs
Shouting before the gates
Hush and be brave !
BE BRAVE !
The leash in their neck
Cutting their circulation
Crying in desperation
Giving up the hope they had
Their eyes shout lack of love
Cats
In small cages
To be protected
From a danger?
Or abandoned in dirty places
"Since they are dirty and insensitive"
"Don't touch them!They are fatal "
Don't worry you'll survive...
I'm truly worried If you have braincells
I laugh with your foolishness
I cry with your brutishness
Hidden in plain sight
Those creatures fight
For their life
"We care for those who suffer"
Yet we go on with our day
Not thinking of their pain?
"Humanity can fuck off" I say
Can you forget the big cages ?
Called circuses
To have " fun" watching innocent creatures
Collapsing in debilitation
Revealing the brainlessness of our nation
Zoos should be for rapists
Don't get me started on experiments
For the ugliest girls to look prettier
Their inanity infuriates me
As for hunting and dirty farms
I assure you
They are better ways to do that
I dream of the day
I live for the day
People disappear
Animals live with no fear
Rule the world .
Appreciation of their worth
Should be a rule in your brain
Help them with no second thoughts
This is what we are meant for .
Don't stay indifferent against abusers.
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Good write N.
thank you!
Abuse of any type is abhorrent whether to people or animals. A good write N.
Exactly!!! Thank you for taking the time to read my poem ! 💕
Meanwhile - being daft - you got out of that prison yet? If it's invisible, how will you know when you've got out?! lol
Note to self: Do shut up Orchi. lol.
Hahaha yes it is actually invisible to those who don't want to see it.Thanks for your comment
You are becoming very accomplished at this writing lark Neilton
Some fantastic lines again
I've seen that look in a dogs eyes
"I laugh with your foolishness, I cry with your brutishness " really impressive
I have a blind cat (rescued)
She is amazing and if anyone tried to abuse her in my presence I hate to think what may happen
Keep it up
You have a conscience and talent
Wonderful combination
Wow this comment truly moved me ! First of all , thank you for being so kind and for taking the time to share that ! I understand completely the love you have for your cat! I have 2 cats and 1 dog , I count on them a lot and if someone hurt them as you said I hate to think what may happen ... Thanks a lot once again !!!
Powerful and poignant. Great work.
Thank you so much!
"Release (Hu)Man from all condemnation."
Isn't that one of the hardest things to do? I'm working on it!
True! We must all do our best !
First time I've wandered in your direction, Neilton...through the crowd. I will return. Such straightforward anger coherently expressed needs to be read by me.
thank you so much! I can\'t wait to read more of my poems and tell me what you think!I would like your honest opinion
Some things just need to be both said and written down as a memo .. this is one of those things .. a powerful and emotionally charged plea & prayer to all regarding the need to value and cherish all life forms .. You also remind me of why I have such contempt for certain members of my own species .. Neville
Thank you so so much Neville !
You are absolutely right .I feel that way ,too !Sorry for taking so much time to answer I was in my village for the summer !
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