Compassion in a shell of flesh
altruistic giving
longing for company of others with which to mesh
heart most forgiving
Loyalty beyond the color blue
curious as a hog
friendly as a dolphin crew
must be a dog
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sorenbarrett (
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Ah, I thought this was a poem about me! lol 🤣
Well I started with you in mind but then Orchi responded to one of my poems and my thoughts went to Fido lol Thanks for the read Teddy most appreciated.
lol woof
A quiz now - ooh! Since when was [insert name of person who is not human - or only just] human?! lol.
My answer is KP. heehee.
Oh Orchi this poem is about Fido. Thanks for the read and kind words.
This seems to me to be less a portrait of a dog than an oblique critique with respect to human frailty, Soren. True?
How perceptive Dave. I thought that no one would see through the guise of presenting a critique through a compliment of another.
Dogs can be true friends soren.
Andy
In dee they can and on many occasions better than people. Thanks for the review Andy it is appreciated.
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