Full Disclosure
When I pull up to your bougie place
There’s no sense to my violence
From sea to shining sea
I sought refuge with M60
Better hang on to your LV’s
I be triggered, then I can’t see
I drive up for Smash-and-grab
When yo same-age kid smashed a frat
Got a whoop-in, so there’s no mo whipping
Yo mama’s Botoxing is grotesque She schoolin’ me gettin friskeeee
I be in the penitentiary to go insane
There’s no sense to your violence
You deviants pay for mass murders
Why can’t I just get paid, suckerz
My rhythm is like waves, It got cadence
I sit in jail cell, a 4 by 4, for our violence
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Different style for you.
Different but the same-thanks for your read, Thomas
Powerful and brilliant I've worked with young children all my life and I've always believed if we give them inspiration and a means to find their passions the world would be better,.with current gun laws in the USA helping those who have been forgotten or abandoned sometimes finding their anger and therefore using guns so sad to.see the carnage on international TV 🌹 I am very passionate about this.
Thank you for relating with love and compassion, dear Teddy …
I grew up and was able to immerse myself in various culture and my “ear of recognition “ is practiced .. you wrote w a precision that achieved and rose to that valued benchmark that leaves readers wanting more such that most all will reread and reread to gather up the nuance you allowed us to reach for. The quality of your chosen detail and hip vernacular reads as it YOU are currently immersed in the world snd everyday life of the creators that’s currently share their magical ryhym’sneithbthe world. I can’t compliment this enough.
Bobby, thanks for taking the care and lending me your sophisticated ear…Can’t wait to hear about your project/s…
I’m trying to send two links to poems so you can choose. This is a look at lots of angles all at once ;negotiating for free art ? Writing an intro. Getting QR codes created and then perform effectively ….help me figure out a way to send yiu links????
Just sent my email via inbox…
Nihilists, anarchists, gang or inmate matters not. Good write
You heard the tone, sorenbarrett- that means a lot…
My very dearest P .. this clearly demonstrates just what a versatile writer you are .. Indeed, your emphasis here on the attitude, values and behaviours most often associated (but sometimes wrongly) with an evidently different and complex mindset that is known to exist within certain subcultures magnificently comes across and achieves the goal I suspect you originally intended for it .. Bravo .. Neville
Thank you for your sophisticated observation-indeed I try to write about all of us (and hopefully with respect and little/no judgement) Empathy helps me as well all people of various subcultures who have generously shared their experiences in therapy rooms, art, and this world…
Powerful penning poetess,
a very evocative and
thought provoking write!! 🤔
Brilliantly composed and
my pleasure to recite! 🙏
Best wishes 🌹. Thad
Thankful for your visit- I enjoy your technical knowledge and open mindedness for themes and forms-how cool of you to “recite”!
I’m back on track.
You ma'am have have incredible versatility & clearly many strings to your bow ..
With much respect, respect .. Neville
So glad to have your encouraging words in this space, dear poetic friend…
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