My Love Senryu.

Goldfinch60



I see her spirit

When I look deep in the eyes

Of the one I love

  • Author: Goldfinch60 (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: July 10th, 2024 00:54
  • Category: Love
  • Views: 26
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  • orchidee

    A fine write Gold.
    My version goes: When I look at KP, I see only botox! lol.

  • Cassie58

    Wonderful sentiment in a beautiful senryu. Happy Wednesday Andy.

    • Goldfinch60

      Most kind Cassie, thank you.

      Andy

    • Tom Dylan

      Nicely done. A fine write. I admit I didn't know what a senryu was. Cheers, Tom.

      • Goldfinch60

        Thank you Tom.A senryu is like a haiku with a 5,7,5 format where a haiku is about Nature and senryu is about emotions.

        Andy

        • Tom Dylan

          Fascinating, Andy. Thanks for that. Cheers, Tom.

        • John Prophet

          Haunting voice….

          • Goldfinch60

            It is often heard John.

            Andy

          • David Wakeling

            Wonderful sentiment.Well constructed.

            • Goldfinch60

              Much appreciated David, thank you.

              Andy

            • Thomas W Case

              Beautiful.

              • Goldfinch60

                Thank you Thomas.

                Andy

              • Teddy.15

                Incredibly romantic and beautiful. 🌹

                • Goldfinch60

                  So kind Teddy, thank you.

                  Andy



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