Rise Ahoy! Like Angelou’s poetic empowerment,
With passion like Neruda’s statements
Is it me or the world’s as beautiful as Elliot
Or it ridicules me? Perhaps they’ve read Smollett
Nature is as idealistic as Shelley says
Might be cold as branches in the snow- it lays,
Like Marvell- nature keeps conducting satires
Gems like Wordsworth and Frost it inspires,
Nature is as wonderful as Keats describes
Like poetic medications Hughes prescribes.
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Great write
I'm glad you liked it, o' kind ine
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My feedback: maybe study a selection of poets (try to internalize their styles whilst looking for the subcontextual meanings of their works), internalize the meanings of many punctuation marks (the colon, hyphen, semi-colon, etc.), teach yourself to understand real similes (and then stay away from W.B. Yeats), and don't write anything that is seasoned by anything too far before the days of Shakespeare (if you do this, be lenient). If you wish to not write anything stupid, stay away from absurdism. If you ask ChatGpt for advice and you find yourself reading something that takes something away from you, go subjectify and internalize. Understanding Metaphysics/Meta-physics/Tarot/& Spirituality will also help out. Also, teach yourself Music Theory and the etymology of words.
My feedback: maybe study a selection of poets (try to internalize their styles whilst looking for the subcontextual meanings of their works), internalize the meanings of many punctuation marks (the colon, hyphen, semi-colon, etc.), teach yourself to understand real similes (and then stay away from W.B. Yeats), and don't write anything that is seasoned by anything too far before the days of Shakespeare (if you do this, be lenient). If you wish to not write anything stupid, stay away from absurdism. If you ask ChatGpt for advice and you find yourself reading something that takes something away from you, go subjectify and internalize. Understanding Metaphysics/Meta-physics/Tarot/& Spirituality will also help out. Also, teach yourself Music Theory and the etymology of words.
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