gentle waves of crystal kindness
edging closer to my feet
as i laze upon these pebbles
smooth and flattened on their surface
by the power of the sea
as i lie here contemplating
nothing more than naked toes
empty thoughts are more than healing
as the creeping calming briny
cleanses me of all my woes
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Cassie58 (
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Comments11
A fine write Cassie.
Thank you so much Orchi. Have a good Thursday.
Beautiful work.
Many thanks Thomas. Pleased you enjoyed my efforts.
how super cool is that, you just wrote about something I have planned for tomorrow after work if the weather remains fine .. a lovely little poem Cassie .. neville
Thank you Neville. It was a beautiful day yesterday, so hope you managed to tickle your toes in the briny. Today looks even better for doing the same.
A beautiful poem,
eye pleasing imagery!! 👍
Great flow way to go,
and it's penned
so eloquently!! 😊
Best wishes 🙏🌹 Thad
Thank you Thad for your encouraging review. All the best.
Sitting by the sea in peaceful harmony is so enlightening Cassie as are your words.
Andy
Thank you Andy. You are so right just wish I had more opportunity to visit. I always find the light so captivating on the ocean. Have a good Thursday.
I'm at the sea and this has just done the same for me dearest Cassie, your description is more than comforting, the most simple things in life and your wonderful words and beautiful imagery would take away any woes. Kudos. 🌹
Lucky you Teddy being beside the sea. Pleased you enjoyed this older poem out for an airing. Thank you so much for your kind words and have the happiest of Thursdays. 🌹
Lovely, Cassie. I could almost hear the waves on the pebbles.
So pleased you enjoyed this poem Tom. Many thanks for stopping by. All the best.
hi cassie another lovely poem
i love being on the beach in the summer
soaking up the sun and a little paddle in the sea love loved the words to your poem you are super talented writer keep writing xxx
Many thanks Jim for your nice review. Have a lovely Thursday. The weather looks even better today. Ideal garden weather.
hopefully can get in the garden today
still a bit to do keep me busy
guess you will be in your garden to
hi Cassie thanks for lovely comment
as always and another smile
have lovely day keep writing please xx
I love this poem it takes me back to the edge of the sea. The place of the birth of life where it all began. Calming and reassuring. Lovely
Thank you so much for a lovely review. Sorry for belated acknowledgement. Have a wonderful Tuesday.
Especially love this line …
gentle waves of crystal kindness
edging closer to my feet
A lovely writing
Dear Caring dove, so sorry I am late responding to your lovely review. I appreciate your thoughts very much. Thank you.
Nice One Cassie,
Felt The Soothing Rhythms
Have A Sweet Day
Thank you so much Reynaldo for your encouraging review. Pleased you enjoyed this poem.
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