The Great Moon and The Baubab

Teddy.15

 
Here we are united at last 
you whispered to me 
in my dream 
and I came to see you 
in all your glory
 
I have no such glory 
I've been stripped of all 
once bright and guiding 
now I'm just a loose thought 
on the minds that once
were filled
with my very romance.  
 
 
 
  • Author: Teddy.15 (Offline Offline)
  • Published: July 18th, 2024 14:00
  • Comment from author about the poem: Another inspiration from my new found poetry friend Sylvia Plath.
  • Category: Reflection
  • Views: 32
  • Users favorite of this poem: aDarkerMind
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  • aDarkerMind

    as touching as always Teddy...

    Sylvia would have enjoyed it,
    of that am sure.

    • Teddy.15

      My dear Melvin, you have I produced me to her, through your own words, I could never thank you enough. 🌹

    • Thomas W Case

      Beautiful work, sweet Teddy. Powerful words.

      • Teddy.15

        I was fortunate to sit with the moon and the Baubab tree a few years ago dear Thomas. Thank you my dear Thomas. 🌹

      • Goldfinch60

        That romance is not lost Teddy it will be within your heart forever.

        Andy

        • Teddy.15

          Of course dear Andy, thank you. 🌹

        • sorenbarrett

          The fragrance of this poem hangs in the air like perfume. The essence of its presence invisible, not able to be seen, but sensed none the less. Beautiful

          • Teddy.15

            Thank you so much dear sorrenbarret, your words are like the very best perfume. 🌹

          • Dan Williams

            Keep going. I'm sure you have more to say.

            • Teddy.15

              The moon is silent yet has a magnificent face, and yes she surely has much to say. Thank you so much. 🌹



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