From the daggers blow life's blood does flow
cuts deep wounds seep
Bright red bleeding dreams dead, into darkness go
What was once bright now night
Breath taken not to awaken
sleep will sweep all this out of sight
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Author:
sorenbarrett (
Offline) - Published: July 19th, 2024 04:57
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Comments7
Dreams, one of my favourite subjects and you just gave me a glimpse of what it's like when everything returns sweet. 🌹
Thank you, Teddy for the most kind words they are deeply appreciated
Good write SB.
Thank you Orchi I appreciate the read and kind comment. Have a nice day.
Excellent write
Thank you for the read, Tony. It is appreciated and valued.
You're welcome
Powerful work. Great flow.
Thank you, Thomas. I appreciate your read and most kind words they are deeply valued.
You extoll beautifully the wonderful properties of sleep, to heal grief and put all in perspective. Kudo my friend!
Bella, it is nice to hear your interpretation that always seems to be on track. It is deeply appreciated. Thank you so much.
A sign of our times. The knives are out and on the streets. So many young people killed in the blink of an eye. A worrying trend. Wish it was all a dream, but it isn’t. Your lines create strong imagery and concern dear poet.
Thank you, Cassie. I appreciate your interpretation as well as read. It is deeply valued. Thank you again.
Strong words soren but life is so much better in reality.
Andy
Thank you, Andy for the read and most positive outlook your positivism is always appreciated
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