Sinking Sand

Tony36

Life is like sinking sand

It looks good at a distance 

It draws you closer

But once you're there

The sand starts pulling you under

 

Life is like that

Somethings looks good at a distance 

It draws you closer 

But when you get there it 

Turns out to be a trap

  • Author: Tony36 (Offline Offline)
  • Published: July 21st, 2024 07:42
  • Category: Unclassified
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  • Jerry Reynolds

    Nice, Tony.
    I generally like a ray of hope. But all dark is good as well.

    • Tony36

      Thank you, normally I write with hope, but we all have our dark times

    • 2781

      It's difficult to know what to trust.

      • Tony36

        Thank you

      • Goldfinch60

        But many times that trap is one of beauty and love Tony.

        Andy

        • Tony36

          Thank you

        • Neville



          Filled with truth .. been there done that and worn the Tee shirt out ..

          • Tony36

            Thank you



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