It's been five years, but
I still miss her.
Home was in
her arms.
That brown hair and
those blue eyes still
dance through my
dreams.
Everyday was
Valentines Day when
we were together.
She's always in my
heart, but the
sky calls;
time doesn't.
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Author:
Thomas W Case (Pseudonym) (
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Comments8
Powerful words, that portray a longing. Perhaps the tense on the last few lines should be changed to past, or am I missing something? Much enjoyed. - Phil A.
I will check. Thank you.
Such a beautiful and tender description of one loved and gone, but never forgotten. Your heart speaks the words of every line, and is heard. Thank you for sharing.
Thank you so much.
A sensitive write T.
Thank you.
If I could have put it into words as elegantly as you my dear Thomas I would have been famous... Absolutely beautiful and heartfelt. 🌹
You are an angel. Thank you, sweet Teddy.
Emotive words Thomas.
Andy
Thanks.
A fantastic write, mate. And the last lines just nailed it. Cheers, Tom
Thanks, Tom.
The longing never goes away.
Thanks. I appreciate it.
A beautiful line: "the sky calls time doesn't"
Thanks.
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