The Sky Calls

Thomas W Case



It's been five years, but
I still miss her.
Home was in
her arms.
That brown hair and
those blue eyes still
dance through my
dreams.
Everyday was
Valentines Day when
we were together.
She's always in my
heart, but the
sky calls;
time doesn't.

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  • MendedFences27

    Powerful words, that portray a longing. Perhaps the tense on the last few lines should be changed to past, or am I missing something? Much enjoyed. - Phil A.

  • Bella Shepard

    Such a beautiful and tender description of one loved and gone, but never forgotten. Your heart speaks the words of every line, and is heard. Thank you for sharing.

  • orchidee

    A sensitive write T.

  • Teddy.15

    If I could have put it into words as elegantly as you my dear Thomas I would have been famous... Absolutely beautiful and heartfelt. 🌹

    • Thomas W Case

      You are an angel. Thank you, sweet Teddy.

    • Goldfinch60

      Emotive words Thomas.

      Andy

    • Tom Dylan

      A fantastic write, mate. And the last lines just nailed it. Cheers, Tom

    • Firefall

      The longing never goes away.

    • sorenbarrett

      A beautiful line: "the sky calls time doesn't"



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