Notice of absence from Doggerel Dave
I will return early January.
I will return early January.
Today, oh what a day – I joined my local gym along the way.
And what a trouble free smooth experience it was:
Courtesy and cooperation the order of the day,
My misanthropic sociopath all but went to pause.
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Doggerel Dave (Pseudonym) (
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- Comment from author about the poem: thought I’d try Andy’s optimism for a change….. (best I could do…)
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A gym can do that to you. Used to work out all the time but too many moves and too many years have passed
Reinvigorate you reprobate.....
Truer word never said reprobate I wear proudly. I get enough exercise cutting grass, walks, digging holes, cutting trails, sawing boards, pruning trees, digging trenches, mixing and hauling concreate as well as various other tasks.
Phew! You put me to shame.....
I think beneath that misanthropic sociopathy there is a kind and loving person who perhaps just needs a good work out. Let it shine my friend, let it shine!!!
Don't bet on it Bella - still, there's quite a quantity of water between you and me, so sleep tight (I will anyway.)........😉
Thank you, I will.
Ohh I've a one-track mind - it goes prodigal, prodigal,..... lol.
Well done, orchi - release yourself from that repetitive circular thought....
Why do they call it a GYM? Was it named after a fella called Jim, and they got the M right. but the GY are two keys left of where they wanted to be?
Does this mean a new beginning for DD? - Phil A.
That got a bit technical for me this time of the morning, Phil. Had me fumbling with the keyboard for a moment there... New beginning? Only time will tell...but there is a repetitive pattern embedded in my life..as in DD....
I though about going to a gym once, but went and lay down in a darkened room until the thought went away
Andy
'Twas more than a thought, Andy, but a necessity. I'm not quite as generally active as you - no croquet, for example.
I hope all goes well Dave an your fitness improves.
Andy
Thanks, Andy.
Lol. Kindness goes a long way.
It did. For a few moments.........
Very uplifting and
Optimistic indeed! 🙏😁
That reminds me,,
my membership expired??¿
Much enjoyed the read!! 😄
Best regards ✌️ Thad
Cheers Thad. Not totally sure that the optimism has any legs. Was a small part of a very long day....😊
To whom it may concern:
Celebrating this five minute piece momentarily at the peak of ‘Trending Now’.
Wonder how that decision was made?
Ah, I know. The self-abasing ‘confession’ - misanthropic sociopath………. Never heard of a metaphor? 🤣
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