By Invitation Only

Neville

By Invitation Only

 

He took the fast but less scenic route through

   her remote and rear territories ..

Which would have allowed him more time,

next time for a more

deliberate and extensive exploration of her

   potentially available terrain ..

Yet she seemed to love every moment of her

   invasion and of his trespass ..

   Not to mention, his unannounced searching ..

Indeed, it now seems she could

barely wait for him to accept the invitation

   to call on her, time and time again ..

 

  • Author: Neville (Offline Offline)
  • Published: July 26th, 2024 03:54
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  • orchidee

    I dread KP's invitations to me! lol.

    • Neville



      You are such a ..................... rodent Orchidee .. (for anyone else passing this way after me, please feel invited to fill in your own word on the dotted line .. Cheers, Neville

    • sorenbarrett

      Anthropomorphism at its best. A most picturesque ride through a scenic landscape. Sign me up for the next tour.

      • Neville



        Would that be one way or both .. cheers .. N

        • sorenbarrett

          Well of course the natural scenic way

        • Tom Dylan

          Nicely done, Neville.

          • Neville



            Thanks again Dan .. always appreciated my friend .. Neville

          • Thomas W Case

            Lol. Fantastic.

            • Neville



              Thanks TW ..

            • MendedFences27

              Ah, the hills and valleys of exploring unmapped frontiers. I think I'll get my coonskin cap and search for a gap among the Cumberlands.
              A great use of metaphor. Saying one thing and meaning another, or was this just a road trip through paradise? Loved this one. - Phil A.

              • Neville



                I reckon you can read me like a book Phil ..

              • Goldfinch60

                The scenic route will show you even more delight Neville, as I am sure that you now know.

                Andy

                • Neville



                  Cheers Andy ..

                • Accidental Poet

                  The prize always sweeter when the time is taken to slow down and take in the beauty along that ride. 😊

                  • Neville



                    Ha .. I just knew something like that was coming .. cheers AP .. 🙂

                    • Accidental Poet

                      Like I've said before N, great minds think alike. 😉👍



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