Music, wine for the ear
to the uninitiated, sweet is best
any type intoxicating it's clear
juicy and sugary its test
Over time darker dryer tones
appeal to the mature palate
flavor discordant earthy zones
dry, musky, dark, wins by popular ballot
Full bodied, washing flavor over senses
vintage and blended musty notes
pouring harmony into dissonances
filling ballot boxes with cultured votes
- Author: sorenbarrett ( Offline)
- Published: July 28th, 2024 05:24
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Comments10
Music can relay powerful messages.
Thanks so much for the review and comment. It is most appreciated
Great analogy (I'm saving metaphor for another time). Subtle flavours with fine optimistic notes to close.
Very much savoured and enjoyed, Soren.
Thanks Dave your comments are appreciated
I like it. And I'd like to hear the sound that emanates from Ors. I've heard that it's a "cool" sound!
Thanks for the read and for the comment. The only ors I've heard are those in a sentence but I may have heard of on in my Sci-fi reading.
moments ago, i painstakingly scrolled thru your quite impressive list of accomplishments, and could envision each individual experience, and felt awed by such an extensive lifetime of adventure speculating that living each moment to the maximum fulfillment only induced a mouth watering reaction in me to avail myself (with considerably less impressive personal endeavors), nevertheless i would feel delighted to befriend thee even if further familiarity predicated on communication thru email more so than reciprocating courtesy my poetic side aware that a person whose range of trials and tribulations dwarfs my meager rather mundane existence (more cerebral than participatory countless opportunities mostly dabbling with writing embellishing elements of style as a lame attempt to accentuate mein kampf constituting threescore and six orbitz round the nearest star more or less insulated from daredevil events (mainly on account of being a shy person, who only lately learned about the benefits of powder milk biscuits - heavens they're tasty) safely ensconced within familiar four walls (analogous to self imprisonment - linkedin to extreme anxiety when outside the realm of familiarity, yet craving to feast on buzzfeeding my overactive imagination thru reading from avast treasure trove of printed material) trying to steal away into a zone of obliviousness to the gain a false sense of security, especially the frightful political situation in these United States of America. rather than remain ignorant regarding the coming fury betokening clashing of terrible swift swords, i try to become educated about webbed wide world happenings reading (what i hope to be) reliable sources of accurate information courtesy the following publications named mother jones, smithsonian magazine, the nation, and time magazine.
matthew scott harris
alias [email protected]
I thank you most humbly for your comments that are too kind. I have lived what I feel is a full life but also feel so have everyone else. We all live what we choose and if we feel it too dull we need only look deeper into what we have experienced and feel. I will send you my e-mail by e-mail and would welcome any correspondence. Once again I thank you for your interest and most kind remarks.
intoxicating make mine a double in a dirty glass ..
Thanks Neville for coming by. I have a chipped one if you want
A terrific poem
music to the
ear indeed! π΅ πΆ πΆ
I totally agree
my pleasure to read.
Best regards βοΈ Thad
Thanks so much for the read and most kind comment it is most appreciated.
"harmony into dissonances", nice. Well rounded.
Thanks so much Dan for the read and comment most appreciated
My preference is a full bodied Rioja soren.
Very good write.
Andy
Thanks Andy I like a variety depending on the dish but to each their own. Cheers
There's a smokey taste to this one and may I say beautifully captivating your reader, I wouldn't mind sitting on the porch trying a glass with you dearest sorrenbarret πΉ
You are always welcome Teddy Thank you for the most kind review and comments they are like you always welcome
Feeling a bit tipsy from reading this exquisite tasting poem. But I believe I'll go for broke and reread for another taste of perfection. Great write soren. πΌπΆπ·π΅π· π
You are too kind my friend it is not old enough to be vintage. Appreciate the read.
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