A Pin Drop Moment

Teddy.15

 
If I told you
I could write about 
the sound of a pin drop 
on the floor 
would you believe me? 
the very moment
it slips through my fingers
and falls through the air 
 
down 
 
down 
 
down 
 
untill...
 
ping.
 
 
  • Author: Teddy.15 (Offline Offline)
  • Published: August 2nd, 2024 02:01
  • Comment from author about the poem: Subject, pin drop 🤣 🤣
  • Category: Humor
  • Views: 38
  • Users favorite of this poem: Cassie58, Bella Shepard, Thoughtless
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  • Cassie58

    A shape poem. Nicely done. Oh to hear a pin drop dear Teddy. I live in a house often filled with noise. Need to go to the peace of a marina to appreciate silence. How golden it can be. Have a beautiful day. 🌹

    • Teddy.15

      LOL, I also come from a very noisy house but sometimes silence is everything. Happy Friday dearest Cassie. Thank you for stopping by 🌹

    • sorenbarrett

      I'll be all day thinking of this metaphor. Yes down, down, down finally it will register Ping! I hate dropping pins on the floor if I don't find them all I eventually will when I step on them. A fun read Teddy and yes I believe you could write a poem about anything.

      • Teddy.15

        lol oh my you do make my day dear sorrenbarret thank you my dear friend, 🌹

      • Bella Shepard

        I think the acute ear of the poetess is atuned to the slightest sound, from which she draws inspiration and presents us with this beautiful poem dear Teddy!

        • Teddy.15

          I think that my poetry friends are truly kind, thank you dearest Bella, such kind words as always 🌹

        • Thomas W Case

          You did it. Great imagery. Wonderful work, sweet Teddy.

          • Teddy.15

            lol thank you for coming by to this my Friday humour dearest Thomas. 🌹

          • Doggerel Dave

            Nah - don't believe yer!😅😂🤣🙃

            • Teddy.15

              🤣🤣🤣🤣 thank you dearest Dave. 🌹

            • Thoughtless

              I enjoyed your poem. It inspired me to write my own poor version on the same topic. a pin
              suddenly

              drops

              and

              Ping!

              Beyond belief!

              • Teddy.15

                Yours could be one of the shortest most imageful poems I've ever read, thank you dear thoughtless. 🤣 🤣 🤣 🌹

                • Thoughtless

                  Well, thank you. Short is my forte. Longer is usually my downfall.

                • Goldfinch60

                  Ping away Teddy. LOL 🤣🌹🤣

                  Andy

                  • Teddy.15

                    LoL 🤣🤣 thank you dear Andy. 🌹 🌹 🤣



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