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Author:
Teddy.15 (
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- Comment from author about the poem: Subject, pin drop 🤣 🤣
- Category: Humor
- Views: 38
- Users favorite of this poem: Accidental Poet, Cassie58, Bella Shepard, Thoughtless
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Comments8
I'll believe anything you say dear Teddy. 😁👍🌹
A shape poem. Nicely done. Oh to hear a pin drop dear Teddy. I live in a house often filled with noise. Need to go to the peace of a marina to appreciate silence. How golden it can be. Have a beautiful day. 🌹
LOL, I also come from a very noisy house but sometimes silence is everything. Happy Friday dearest Cassie. Thank you for stopping by 🌹
I'll be all day thinking of this metaphor. Yes down, down, down finally it will register Ping! I hate dropping pins on the floor if I don't find them all I eventually will when I step on them. A fun read Teddy and yes I believe you could write a poem about anything.
lol oh my you do make my day dear sorrenbarret thank you my dear friend, 🌹
I think the acute ear of the poetess is atuned to the slightest sound, from which she draws inspiration and presents us with this beautiful poem dear Teddy!
I think that my poetry friends are truly kind, thank you dearest Bella, such kind words as always 🌹
You did it. Great imagery. Wonderful work, sweet Teddy.
lol thank you for coming by to this my Friday humour dearest Thomas. 🌹
Nah - don't believe yer!😅😂🤣🙃
🤣🤣🤣🤣 thank you dearest Dave. 🌹
I enjoyed your poem. It inspired me to write my own poor version on the same topic. a pin
suddenly
drops
and
Ping!
Beyond belief!
Yours could be one of the shortest most imageful poems I've ever read, thank you dear thoughtless. 🤣 🤣 🤣 🌹
Well, thank you. Short is my forte. Longer is usually my downfall.
Ping away Teddy. LOL 🤣🌹🤣
Andy
LoL 🤣🤣 thank you dear Andy. 🌹 🌹 🤣
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