still
remember
how
the
summer
breeze
would
blow
through
your
hair
and
you
would
turn
away
because
you
thought
it
was
messed
up
but
i
was
just
taken
by
how
it
danced.
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Author:
Jon Nakapalau (
Offline) - Published: August 5th, 2024 19:19
- Comment from author about the poem: Years ago.
- Category: Reflection
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Comments3
Weird...
Interesting how a single detail can be the focus of an entire thought or feeling. Nicely said
Great loving words Jon.
Andy
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