Letting Go of The Light
I so needed to fly
tonight ..
I just wanted you
to know
that I finally let go
of the light ..
I so needed to die
before
you do, my love ..
I don’t
think, but I know
and only
too well, I would
not be able,
or want, to go on
for even one
moment without you ..
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Author:
Neville (
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But now I'm in the dark - I let go of the light - me lamp, or candle, or torch, or whatever gives light! lol.
Shine on you crazy diamond
Now I've fallen down a pothole in the dark!
A wonderful tribute to Dylan Thomas here Neville,. Unlike he though this is romantic and most touching. Loved it.
get outa here sb .. you just made my bloomin day so you did ..
I've often thought of such loss, and you have put into words the very feeling. This poem runs deep in emotion that touches the soul. Beautiful!
my heart, brain and mouth are smiling in sync with gratitude Bella .. thank you so much .. Neville 💛
Not a subject we want to dwell on, but one we do think about and talk about on occasions. After 45 years of togetherness, the separation would be excruciating for me, but I know I would cope somehow, because my nans, my mum and my sister all coped. I would be walking in their footsteps. My husband John feels much the same way you do. There is a lot of love and togetherness in your words Neville. A beautiful poem to sum up a long relationship with many memories.
I neva thought for one moment that you wouldn't understand my very dear C .. thank you kindly and true .. N
Loving emotive words Neville.
Andy
Thanks Andy
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