I Think I Like You But ..
She said boy,
I think
I like you but ..
Are you
interactable ..
I said,
maybe ..
But get this ..
I am not
entirely sure
what you
are getting at ..
She then
went on to
ask me ..
Do you have
a wife by any
chance ..
I replied, yes ..
That, then
was the same
moment
she said okay ..
But let’s
both now try
to forget
I ever even,
bothered to ask ..
- Author: Neville ( Offline)
- Published: August 7th, 2024 01:05
- Category: Unclassified
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- Users favorite of this poem: MendedFences27, Bella Shepard
Comments9
Should I admit having a trout-wife? KP. lol.
I would keep it quiet if I I were you .. if muffin the mule is now banned I can't imagine what kind of flack you would get if that gets out ..
Donald Duck should be banned. He don't wear any underclothes! lol. That's swoony.
Fine words Neville.
Andy
Thank you for indulging me this mane Andy .. much appreciated sir .. Neville
Sometimes we ask for more than we want to know, or should I say ignorance is bliss. Great build up in this clever write.
I have no doubt you are absolutely write .. cheers
I woulda asked how you spell 'intracitable' and then the definition and then pursued the conversation (closed questions) in that direction.... I'm not fond of evasion generally, just save it for special occasions….
is intracitable by any chance that state of shared heightened awareness I have been looking for all these years within my various relationships by any chance .. I'm asking for a friend you understand ..
Understood.
Well written, Neville. I don't question strange.
You sir are a gentleman .. 😎👍
Quite the encounter. The less said the better. Best not to engage in questioning, just make statements.
The directness of your poem gives it the sense of honesty, and her final remark a sense of guilt. Loved it. - Phil A
Damn you're good ..
Excellent work, my friend.
Thank you Thomas
It was an interesting word she chose to use, interactable. And a very interesting exchanage which I presume ended by signing on the dotted line. All was well I hope.
I would certainly consider doing it all over again .. many thanks Bella .. kindest regards, your literary friend, Neville
A fine write, Neville. The last line just nailed it.
I was hammered when it came to me .. cheers T .. N 🙂
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