A Very Grand Finale

Teddy.15

 
I dreamt, I was a poet
 
playing the piano
 
and as I was playing
 
I was also reciting my 
 
most famous poem
 
the notes were dramatic 
 
no one could deny 
 
later, that night...
 
I died with a smile. 
 
 
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  • sorenbarrett

    Dying with a smile is the only way to go. Then to die while performing two arts simultaneously is add victory to one's final act. Glad that it was a dram though

    • Teddy.15

      LOL oh you are so good at reading my work my dear sorrenbarret, thank you dear friend. 🌹

    • Jerry Reynolds

      Good write, Teddy. Are you getting married? Dreams, death, and pianos.

      • Teddy.15

        lol oh no I'm already married 13 years next month, I wouldn't do it twice lol
        hey maybe ill croak it though, family holidays can do that. LoL 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

        • Jerry Reynolds

          I hear that girl. I have found one Mom and one wife to be sufficient.

          • Teddy.15

            lol 🤣 you are so brave 🤣

          • MendedFences27

            Hang in there. Life is all we have. Loved your poem and it's rather intense subject. To go out with a smile? I guess I want to be run over by a beer truck.
            Keep writing and posting and practicing your piano. - Phil A.

            • Teddy.15

              LoL that's a great one. Thank you dearest Phil, what ever fulfills our dreams eh... 🤣

            • Thomas W Case

              Beautiful vision, sweet Teddy.

              • Teddy.15

                Thank you sweet Thomas. 🌹

              • Bella Shepard

                Poetry and music inextricably linked in this beautiful dream of a poem. The pic couldn't be more perfect, come think of it, so is the poem.

                • Teddy.15

                  Thank you dearest Bella, you truly are a very beautiful soul. 🌹

                • Dan Williams

                  Wow. Sadness with a capital 'S'. Very well done.

                  • Teddy.15

                    Yes Dan, thank you so much, very kind of you to come by to this. 🌹

                  • Dan Williams

                    Or, no?

                  • Goldfinch60

                    Play away Teddy but please to not go yet as we need to hear your final concerto.

                    Andy

                    • Teddy.15

                      And what a final it would be, thank you dear Andy. 🌹



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