You chatter away like
an angry squirrel,
I watch you scamper
off and finally resemble
a fading flower.
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Author:
Thomas W Case (Pseudonym) (
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I find much humour in this probably because I'm a women. 🌹
Lol. Thanks, sweet Teddy.
this has happened to me too once or twice,
I just seem to attract nothing but rodents these days .. Neville
Lol. Thanks, brother.
Was this directed at a woman? Seems like or maybe just my prejudiced view of things.
Lol. Thank you.
No offence to those with genuine memory problems, but I can't remember where I put the 3 brain cells that are responsible for my memory! lol.
Lol.
I'm a rodent of sorts - a guinea pig as in my pic. Not giant hamsters, as I explained in a previous poem to folk.
Though we've a giant rat or two in our garden, about the size of half a cat!
Thank you.
Powerful penning
a poignant write! ✍️
Awesome use of
metaphor,
to read a delight!! 👍
Best regards ✌️ Thad
Thank you.
Short and sweet says it all, a very interesting analogy. I feed the squirrels at a tiny picnic table on my deck, and love to watch them scamper when I walk out the door. Such a fun write!
Lol. Thank you.
I'd like to say how much I liked about this, but I forget how.
Thanks.
True words Thomas.
Andy
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Nicely done, Thomas. Some cracking imagery.
Thank you, brother.
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