You are sweet I am savor
Each of us a different flavor
Once mixed can you separate sugar from salt?
Both a different taste, no one's at fault
Where does darkness end and light begin?
Me without and you within
Roots become trunk, trunk turns to limbs
All now one as light dims
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Author:
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- Published: August 8th, 2024 05:31
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A fine write, SB. Great imagery made me think.
Thank you for your read and comment it is most appreciated
Soulmates till the end. I'm salt and my husband is sugar, that's what I believe anyway or maybe he is the salt depends on the day. This is sadly profoundly beautiful. 🌹
Thank you so much Teddy you are right on track with the intent of this piece. Appreciate the kind words
L9ve it
Thank you so much for the read and so glad you liked it
You're welcome
The title sounds a tad Musketeer-ish! lol.
Ah yes it has been a couple of years since I read that. Thanks for the read Orchi
.. its a jungle out here .. it aint a melting pot no more .. tis lovely ..
Thanks Neville yes it is a jungle and the melting pot has been taken away. I appreciate your read and comment it is appreciated.
Superb work. Powerful.
Thanks so much Thomas
A fine write. Works on so many levels.
Thank you Tom for the read and comment it is deeply valued
The last line grabs me.
Thank you so much for the read and comment it is appreciated and deeply valued.
Great poem Soren, it really makes you think.
Thanks so much for the read and generous words they are valued
Left and Right, two wings of the same bird. I saw this quote today. Your poem reminded me. Also opposites attract. Really like what you have penned here.
Thanks so much Cassie yes that is so true Far left and far right meet. Thanks for the read and comment.
I think that's definitely chemistry. Or perhaps complementary. A well polished little gem, Soren.
Thank you so much Dave I do so appreciate your reads and comments and value them as special.
Terrific poem
thought provoking
and true all the above! 🤔
Sugar and salt,
a great
possibility when
It comes to love! ❤️
Awesome read indeed, much enjoyed!
Best regards ✌️ Thad
Thank you Thad for the read and most generous words of encouragement they are deeply valued.
Are you cranking out these gems every day? Amazing.
That's what happens when you have nothing better to do and a mind that wanders. Thanks for the read and comment Dan it is most appreciated.
Very good words soren but I am sure that light will get brighter.
Andy
Andy your encouraging words are a beam of sunlight. Thanks for your review and comment
Very good
Thank you so much
A beautifully written two stanzas here sorenbarrett, that reminds us the importance of a true core unity, despite our many differences.
Bravo and I hope that all is well.
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