I want to be in a world where I walk along
Without a care to be seen.
Where I can talk to people, and their problems
Remain unseen.
The world where all is right and I can live those dreams
That form in my mind.
To live in a world where each help each other,
Where everyone is kind.
A world where accidents sometimes happen but remain
An accident; not to blame
Others, who may sometime in the future,
Do just the same.
To walk with my love along countryside paths,
By sun drenched rivers.
Listening to the gentle breeze rustling the trees,
That my world delivers.
To be just on my own overlooking the sea,
As the waves hit the sand
On the shore, with their billowing spray
Covering the land.
To look at the sunset at the end of the day,
So red in the sky.
The vivid colours bringing wonder,
To my tear stained eye.
Surely these thoughts search for a place that
Calls strongly to you,
That place will be found in “Heaven, where,
Dreams come true”.
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Author:
Goldfinch60 (Pseudonym) (
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- Comment from author about the poem: Idea from the line “Heaven is where your dreams come true” in the film “Field of Dreams”
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Comments7
Beautiful poem and I have to say Field of Dreams was a wonderful film. A most memorable one. Your posted music was a fine match for your poetic words Andy. Happy Friday.
So kind Cassie, very much appreciated. Thank you.
Andy
Lovely poem GF. Field of dreams is a good movie.
It surely is a good film SC, good to hear from you.
Andy
Somewhere that dream is a reality, Andy. Beautiful poem. 🌹
It surely is AP, thank you.
Andy
Dreams and heaven the only place that this happens so well expressed in this delightful poem of both.
Most kind soren, thank you so much.
Andy
Nicely pen Andy..
Thanks John.
Andy
Such beauty in every line ❤️
So very kind Teddy, thank you.
Andy
Terrific poem my friend! 👍
Captivating, emotional and
touching! 🙏
Such eye pleasing imagery
throughout, loved it! 😁
Thanks for sharing,!!
Best regards ✌️ Thad
Most kind Thad and much appreciated,
Andy
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