Because My Darling It all Belongs to You

Teddy.15

 
When the sun leaves the great stage 
 
and the moon comes to light 
 
a shooting star spreads it's joy
 
through star filled skies 
 
lighting hearts and eyes 
 
remember that nothing 
 
not even all that
 
will ever be more spectacular 
 
than this fire, burning deep
 
inside my heart
 
because my darling...
 
it all
 
belongs to you. 
 
 
 
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  • Doggerel Dave

    That is a close impassioned tribute Teddy that I know your husband will take to his heart and cherish.

    • Teddy.15

      If my Husband was Keanu Reeves lol thank you dearest beloved Dave. ๐ŸŒน

      • Doggerel Dave

        I think It's high time he locked you up and only let you out on Sundays for prayer and exercise......๐Ÿ˜‡

        • Teddy.15

          lol ๐Ÿคฃ who would wash his clothes and cook his meals? He's Italian you know lol

          • Doggerel Dave

            Nothing quite like a visit for some poetry and obtaining a cultural education as a bonus. Many Thanks M'dear...

            • Teddy.15

              But if I was locked up for 6 days a week with Keanu, I would probably offer to do a bit of ironing lol ๐Ÿคฃ

              • Doggerel Dave

                It's education I'm after - not obsession.....๐Ÿ˜‡
                I do detect the merest hint of compromise though.....

                • Teddy.15

                  well, when I showed him what was written on this page he did laugh his head off he did love my poem, I think if he could sell me for a few bob he would lol i think he tried once on eBay ๐Ÿคฃ ๐Ÿ’™

                • Thoughtless

                  Aww. How nice.

                  • Teddy.15

                    I'm a big soppy love ball today lol thank you dear thoughtless. ๐ŸŒน

                  • sorenbarrett

                    An endearing present in words given to another in the form of natures splendors compared to another's worth. So nicely worded

                    • Teddy.15

                      โค๏ธ thank you my dearest sorrenbarret ๐ŸŒน

                    • Accidental Poet

                      Such passionate words of love for one so special. For me, brings thoughts of one such person. Beautiful write Teddy. ๐ŸŒน

                      • Teddy.15

                        Of course it would be your Sharon. โค๏ธ Thank you dearest poet. ๐ŸŒน

                        • Accidental Poet

                          However could you have known? ๐Ÿ˜‰๐ŸŒน

                        • Tony36

                          Beautiful

                          • Teddy.15

                            Thank you very much Tony36. ๐ŸŒน

                            • Tony36

                              You're welcome

                            • MendedFences27

                              A sweet tribute to one's lover. Taking the night sky and giving it to him. He would trade it all for your love, I'm sure. Wonderful poem. _ Phil A.

                              • Teddy.15

                                This was written for Keanu Reeves lol thank you dear Phil. ๐ŸŒน

                              • Thomas W Case

                                Beautiful work, Teddy. Tremendous.

                                • Teddy.15

                                  Thank you dearest Thomas ๐ŸŒน

                                • Dan Williams

                                  Ahh, you successful lovers. I am so jealous.

                                  • Teddy.15

                                    lol ๐Ÿคฃ thank you Dan ๐ŸŒน

                                  • Goldfinch60

                                    Wonderful lovelorn words Teddy.

                                    Andy

                                    • Teddy.15

                                      Can you believe it lol thank you dearest Andy
                                      ๐ŸŒน

                                    • aDarkerMind

                                      a deep and touching write Teddy...
                                      and if I were to be granted one wish,
                                      it would that I am Keanu Reeves.
                                      am longing for an Italian pizza, and my ironing.......
                                      that can wait ;o)

                                      • Teddy.15

                                        lol oh Melvin, and if I had one wish I too would wish you were Keanu Reeves ๐Ÿคฃ so very kind of you to come by today dear friend. Thank you for bringing your beautiful heart on my page. ๐ŸŒน

                                      • Cassie58

                                        Dear Teddy. This is a beautiful. Heartfelt and gorgeous words. Now if that doesnโ€™t melt his butter heart, I donโ€™t know what will. Love your posted image too. Happy Thursday dear poet ๐ŸŒน

                                        • Teddy.15

                                          Thank you so much my dear Cassie, I seem to tickle his funny bone with my poetry, lol ๐Ÿคฃ
                                          Today is Ferragosto here in Italy so it's a bank holiday. Hot as hell too. Happy Thursday my dear friend. ๐ŸŒน

                                          • Cassie58

                                            Have a wonderful Bank Holiday Teddy ๐ŸŒน

                                          • Parisab

                                            Your love language displayed on the beautiful stage you described in your poem! Thatโ€™s what happens in Tuscany, forget Keanuโ€™s Hollywood-your heart sings of opera ๐Ÿฅ‚

                                            • Teddy.15

                                              Dearest Parisab, such a kind thing to say, and of course it wasn't really written for Keanu, truly graces by your lovely words. Thank you so much dear friend. ๐ŸŒน

                                              • Parisab

                                                LOL, yes I figured-but Iโ€™m not judgy or a hater, as we say on this side of the pond๐Ÿ˜‚

                                              • Bella Shepard

                                                This is the most beautiful poem to love I've ever read, and there is a tear there ready to drop. Add to this the swans forming a heart and it is perfection. Truly and profoundly meant dear Teddy.

                                                • Teddy.15

                                                  Thank you dearest Bella, you humble my heart with your words, I hope to see you back with us more often beautiful poetess. ๐ŸŒน



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