Moving On
I take it you’ve moved on from me.
I feel it in my heart.
But, if I’d loved you differently
would we still be apart?
I loved you in the only way
a heart like mine could do
and if I asked you now to say
“What was it made you blue?”
Would you still say “Another day
would be too much with you.”
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MendedFences27 (
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Comments6
A sad write. Laments about how things would be if we were different are not very helpful. A nice write in rhyme.
Fab rhyme, awe, so maybe just maybe in the end love came to an end, but your poetry is truly wonderful. 🌹
A really poignant poem about love gone wrong. Nice rhyme and a good flow to the lines. Happy Tuesday MendedFences.
If its gonna go wrong, it's gonna go wrong big time .. there's no gradual shift or halfway point .. well penned Phil .. Neville
So true Phil.
Andy
This a summation of my second wife departing. Well said.
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