Capillary waves in circles from a stone cast in a pond
spread their influence through the mirror
Distorted reflections of creation's bond
bringing nature's wonders nearer
Watery echoes heard near and far long after they disperse
Rock now buried in an aqueous muddy grave
its jostle of leaves and fish diverse
In the book of the universe its memory it does engrave
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How very beautiful, I love your title too. Wonderful imagery and a soothing tone. 🌹
Thank you so much friend your comment is greatly appreciated.
Beautiful poem, Soren. Water and memory!
Thank you so much for the review and most kind words of encouragement they are much appreciated.
A fine write SB.
My poem goes something like:
In muddy waters much sewage is found
And plenty green algae...
All stuff I give KP to eat and drink! heehee.
Thanks Orchi glad to provide a new menue
Heehee - Fido and I of course have 5 star meals - roasts, caviar, champagne, salmon, huge puddings, strawberries and cream, etc.
this reinforces the view that nothing happens in isolation & that everything is in some way or ways interconnected & likewise influenced ..
Indeed and so it is. Thanks for the review and understanding interpretation Neville
A wonderful write, ✍️
great imagery my friend! 👍
Captivating beginning
to end! 👏
Best regards ✌️ Thad
Thank you so much Thad for the read and kind words they are always most appreciated
Super words soren, those ripples can go on forever.
Andy
Yes the can. Thank you so much Andy I appreciate your words of understanding.
Again, knew this was you without looking. Fluid, concise, image calling. Very nice.
Thank you so much Dan for the read and comment it is deeply appreciated
A very nice twosome here sorenbarrett.
The rhythm you have written such a scene, mirrors the rippling effect, that makes each read of this poem more immersive.
Bravo, and I hope that all is well.
Thank you so much for your read and comment they are deeply valued and cherished.
You are very welcome sorenbarrett.
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