Mask

Thoughtless

a permanent smile
on my face from ear to ear-
war in the trenches

  • Author: JDB (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: August 17th, 2024 07:21
  • Comment from author about the poem: You get it.
  • Category: Unclassified
  • Views: 32
  • Users favorite of this poem: Teddy.15
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  • Teddy.15

    Quite brilliant, on the outside your smiling but from within you are in darkness, what's not to get. Brilliant senryu 🌹

    • Thoughtless

      As always dear Teddy.15, I am delighted by your insightful comment, brightened my day. Thank you.

    • sorenbarrett

      Love Haikus and this one is a good one at least two possible meanings a dead soldier with a fixed smile at leaving the war or a living one that loves war.

      • Thoughtless

        Perhaps life is a war as well. Thanks for the insight.

      • Tony36

        Great write

        • Thoughtless

          Thanks.

          • Tony36

            You're welcome

          • Cheeky Missy

            Ya, being social. Welcome. Lovely!



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