Notice of absence from rengoku
if I’m off I’m probably punching my bed in anger
if I’m off I’m probably punching my bed in anger
at the window seat,
her song made sweet,
she wears a white dress,
and quiets her stress,
writing poems about me!
she smiles at me and says,
don't fret my dear,
the end is near
the Lord has told me so,
so pack up your kindness
and peace and peace and go!
i have a home up here,
where we will be very near
from everlasting to everlasting.
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Author:
Gyiuu does cry (Pseudonym) (
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- Comment from author about the poem: this is what my grandma would say to me if i could see her again in heaven
- Category: Family
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Comments6
Good poem zelda
ty mackenz!!!!!!
Aww such a beautiful write. 🌹
thank you mason
Sweet and such a wonderful thought. Nicely expressed in a poem. Very nice.
Very, very lovely, evocative and charming. Excellent imagery and word usage. You're still young, however, when I was your age I was just as hopeful, dreaming so much of a grand day when I could imagine a book of my collected poetical endeavors published, that I collated a book of them with what resources I could find. They were much simpler than what you see me posting here.
Read the poetry you most admire and you'll begin to learn how to follow in that vein.
This beauty is delicate and sweet, loaded to taste and winsome.
Thank you for sharing.
Great write
thank you everyone!
You're welcome
I hope I can be as gracious at the end. Nice work.
thank you Dan !!!!
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