The full moon lingers pale and bright,
A ghost of night in morning's light.
Soft whispers weave through fields of dew,
Where shadows fade and day breaks through.
The world is still in quiet awe,
As dawn’s soft fingers to my heart pour.
A silver orb in sky’s embrace,
Retreats having been so full of grace
Yet in the hush before the day,
The moon and sun in silence lay,
Two realms a breath apart now gone,
The full moon yields to coming dawn.
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Author:
Goldfinch60 (Pseudonym) (
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- Comment from author about the poem: When I awoke this morning the full moon was shining on me.
- Category: Reflection
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- Users favorite of this poem: Accidental Poet, sorenbarrett, Teddy.15, Cassie58, Qurrathul Ain
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Comments9
A fine write Gold.
Argh! The nights are drawing in. Has been so since about June 21st!
Thanks Orchi.
So true but it will draw out again after December 27 st!
Andy
That'll be 21st? Erm, just before Ch....... We know it! lol.
this is my most favourite GF60 to date Andy .. excellent from dawn to dusk ..
Most kind Neville, so glad you liked it.
Andy
Wot - a new rhymer has entered the ranks. Stiff competition by the looks.
More please, Andy.
I do rhyme very occasionally Dave, there are and will be others.
Andy
The Moon was shining on you because you are in the spotlight Andy. 🌕👍
Thank you for your very kind words AP.
Andy
A most beautiful write Andy loved every word and image.
So kind soren, thank you.
Andy
I love how nature spoke and interacted with my life in this poem. Thanks for sharing.
So glad MDS, nature is so wonderful in our lives.
Andy
Beautiful. I'm glad to see you saw the full moon of dawn lol 🤣
Thank you Teddy. Yes the sky was clear of clouds so I had a goo view of it,
Andy
Really nice poem Andy. That silver orb has been the centre of many a romance. Thanks for Frank. I listened all the way through. Happy Wednesday.
Most kind Cassie, yes very true the moon shows us all romance and always will.
Andy
So easily yet completely described! Very well done.
Thank you Dan, much appreciated.
Andy
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