COMBATIVE

Bobby O

TRAVELS
Confusion steered,  stole my will to live
Ignorance blocked positive 
Summon strength to give
Combative 
Thirst 

Once again request friends to forgive 
Broken trust cumulative
Summon strength to give
Combative
Worst 

Hubris shed, second chance to relive
Eliminate sensitive
Summon strength to give
Combative
First
Bobby O

  • Author: Bobby O (Offline Offline)
  • Published: August 21st, 2024 08:32
  • Comment from author about the poem: Tried my hand at a Formatted Poem
  • Category: Unclassified
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  • sorenbarrett

    Loved the creative rhyme scheme in this Bobby

    • Bobby O

      Way cool. I was challenged to complete a piece w strict a format Thanks for the nice words but that formatting seemed restrictive. It’s like the nun’s used to tell my mother.
      “He’s a nice boy but he lacks discipline”

      • sorenbarrett

        I can feel that and it why I have chosen not to enter contests



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