TRAVELS
Confusion steered, stole my will to live
Ignorance blocked positive
Summon strength to give
Combative
Thirst
Once again request friends to forgive
Broken trust cumulative
Summon strength to give
Combative
Worst
Hubris shed, second chance to relive
Eliminate sensitive
Summon strength to give
Combative
First
Bobby O
- Author: Bobby O ( Online)
- Published: August 21st, 2024 08:32
- Comment from author about the poem: Tried my hand at a Formatted Poem
- Category: Unclassified
- Views: 36
- Users favorite of this poem: GenXer Shamrocker ☘️, Thomas W Case
Comments1
Loved the creative rhyme scheme in this Bobby
Way cool. I was challenged to complete a piece w strict a format Thanks for the nice words but that formatting seemed restrictive. It’s like the nun’s used to tell my mother.
“He’s a nice boy but he lacks discipline”
I can feel that and it why I have chosen not to enter contests
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