Inside Out

Teddy.15

 

In just one single moment it was all taken away

everything I ever knew 

everything I ever took for granted about life 

It never crossed my mind 

but looking back now

I realize, I was young and naive 

nothing wrong with that 

all I know now, is this...

when we are put in that deep dark place 

we have to learn to fight the force 

clinging to every single possible exit 

because even on our darkest days

the light can seep through the cracks

eventually, overcrowding

that, in which is dark

to be reborn, to be stronger on the inside 

and that will simply make everything shine 

Including who I am on the outside. 

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  • Tony36

    Excellent write

    • Teddy.15

      Thank you. 🌹

      • Tony36

        You're welcome

      • sorenbarrett

        The inner light becomes an outer glow. Smiles of the heart on the outside grow. Love for what lies within is shown to others through a compassionate grin. Sorry for the ramble but your poem just brought this out. Such a great message to be sent. Lovely

        • Teddy.15

          You are a beautiful soul my friend, 🌹 thank you.

        • Thoughtless

          Good advice. Timely message. When we are young, we either think we are immortal or have already lived too long. Thanks for sharing these thoughts.

          • Teddy.15

            Amazing how you see this, I guess if you don't know all my work it wouldn't be obvious but this is about losing some very important people when I was young, and I often talk about my grief through my work, this one is about coming through the other side after the loss. I love your take on this I'm Amy case. Thank you so much dear Thoughtless 🌹

          • GenXer Shamrocker ☘️

            Beautifully written

            • Teddy.15

              Thank you so much. 🌹

            • Thomas W Case

              Tremendous work. Magnificent. You nailed it.

              • Teddy.15

                Thank you dearest Thomas. 🌹

              • Cassie58

                Those dark days of loss are so incredibly painful. They have to be worked through. No short cuts. You can measure the love by the strength of the pain experienced. Sometimes that can feel intolerable. And then a glimpse of light. Yes like being reborn. Super writing dear Teddy. I felt these words deeply. 🌹

                • Teddy.15

                  Means so much your words dearest Cassie, thank you from the very bottom of my heart. 🌹

                • Dan Williams

                  Where do you buy such optimism? I'll take a bushel of it! Nice work.

                  • Teddy.15

                    I was thinking the same thing about myself, thank you dear Dan, I've always been although sometimes it's been so hard to bring it to the surface. So glad you felt it thank you. 🌹

                  • Goldfinch60

                    The light will always find its way inot your life Teddy as it always does to mine.

                    Andy

                    • Teddy.15

                      I know dear Andy, thank you dear friend. 🌹

                    • Accidental Poet

                      You just amaze me Teddy. 🌹

                      • Teddy.15

                        What goes around comes around you amaze me, we each have a personal journey I'm glad you get to see mine and vice versa, thank you my dear A.P 🌹

                        • Accidental Poet

                          When poets inspire each other, the world becomes a happier place. 🌹🫂🌹

                        • aDarkerMind

                          nailed it indeed Teddy...

                          what a talent you are.

                          • Teddy.15

                            Thank you dearest Melvin, inspired by the greats I am. 💙 🌹

                          • Bella Shepard

                            Your words strike a note deep in the heart, for everyone who has had those darkest days, that hope is there and light will find them. Thank you dear Teddy, this poem is especially appreciated.

                            • Teddy.15

                              Thank you dearest Bella. 💙



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