Right or wrong

sorenbarrett

Rose, thorn, nostalgic, forlorn, aged heirloom or rag torn
dark of night, breaking light, weak, might, loose or tight
strong, weak, valley, mountain peak, found or still to seek
what's right, what's wrong in the eye of the beholder does belong

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  • Teddy.15

    Wow, it certainly does dearest sorrenbarret beautiful. 🌹

    • sorenbarrett

      Thank you friend for the read and remark it means a lot

    • orchidee

      A fine write SB.
      KP is the thorn between two roses! lol.

      • sorenbarrett

        Thanks Orchi at least there are two roses

        • orchidee

          Phew yes, two roses. KP's a thorn in my side and that's a fact! lol.

        • John Prophet

          Universe of views…. Great insight write…

          • sorenbarrett

            Thank you John for the read yes there are at least s many views as there are people

          • Doggerel Dave

            The eye of the beholder well versed there, Sorern.

            • sorenbarrett

              Thanks Dave appreciate the support.

              • Doggerel Dave

                I thought it was a little polished gem.

              • Cassie58

                Beautifully penned Soren. Yes the eye of the beholder. Many ways to look at something. We have our own unique perspective. Happy Thursday.

                • sorenbarrett

                  Thanks Cassie for the back up. Yes everyone has their own view and who is to say who is right?

                • Accidental Poet

                  For when there is balance in all things, life moves along. Nicely penned soren. 😊👍

                  • sorenbarrett

                    True it is balance is the key especially on a tight rope. Thanks Accidental for the read and comment

                  • Neville


                    tis such a personal thing ..

                    we have so much to learn but so little to prove .. it's all a matter of perspective isn't it ... Nice one sb

                    • sorenbarrett

                      I used to prove everything arguing until I was blue now I know you can prove nothing and the blues have gone away. Thanks Neville

                    • senjuro

                      very good rhyming soren!

                      • sorenbarrett

                        Thank you Zelda it is appreciated.

                      • evenwheniLie

                        Word play; excellent!

                        • sorenbarrett

                          Thanks so much for the read and comment I appreciate it.

                        • Mason Vollman

                          Maybe right and wrong has a little to do with opinion! Because law is definitely not always right! Good write Soren!

                          • sorenbarrett

                            Thanks Mason yes indeed opinions are like **** everybody's got one. Thanks for the read and comment my friend.

                          • Goldfinch60

                            To see what is right or wrong one must be prepared to look and listen which many do not bother to do in these modern times soren.

                            Andy

                            • sorenbarrett

                              Thanks for the review and comment Gold. No one wants to hear seems to be the problem.



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