Music of relationships a symphony
some discordant others in harmony
written or improvised, in poly-rhythm or synchrony
flat or sharp, minor or major key
Strings, brass woodwinds or drums
seduced our will succumbs
each sweet note like falling crumbs
devoured by gnawing hunger that rapture becomes
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sorenbarrett (
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Good write SB.
Thanks Orchi I thought that music might appeal to you and Gold.
Indeed yesterday in tune today so out of tune it's just a mess. lol what a wonderful metaphor. 🌹
Thanks Teddy for the read and comment yes the tune plays different on different days
Assuming you mean close relationships, Soren they are always dynamic in my experience, and your musical analogy feels very apt to me. Thanks
Thanks so much Dave I appreciate the read and comment. Yes you are right talking about close relationships.
Beautiful write Soren! 🌹🙏
Thank you Mason
I repeat myself again: music can save us all if we just let it. Nice work.
Thanks Dan for the read and interpretation is is deeply appreciated. Yes music can be a form of salvation.
Brilliant.
Thank you Thomas
So very true soren, music can take you to so many places and bring every emotion to you.
Andy
Thank you Andy I know you love music and people and life as well. Have a wonderful day
A fabulous metaphor. That’s relationships for you. How boring the same tune would be lol. So nicely composed. Have a happy Sunday.
Thank you so much Cassie for the read and most kind and understanding interpretation.
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