Upon the river Trent,
ripples wholesome; formed,
such a pleasant dance,
in a world, that is scorned,
the rudders of a boat,
recalled a painful blade,
but drifted catatonic,
because the sound they made,
dogs and ducks; conversed,
with words, that could define,
a safer way; to co-exist,
to walk a better line,
then couples hand in hand,
again, broke solitude,
thinking twos are right,
and that ones alone are skewed,
up in canopies,
birdsong lit the ears,
made some warmth and comfort,
which wiped away the tears,
it was a Friday dusk,
Farndon was the stage,
easing such a hardened thought,
that was a bottled rage.
- Author: AuburnScribbler ( Offline)
- Published: August 24th, 2024 11:02
- Comment from author about the poem: I've had a few good long walks recently, both because I felt like it, and because my mother and I had a disagreement, which has still left me a bit angry. I had to clear some air. One of those walks, that happened yesterday, took me to a familiar nearby village called Farndon, of which, I have very fond memories, both from childhood and the recent past. So, I thought I would write this one with a notepad and pen, on a worn out park bench, that of course, I would write it up later, in order to share on here. Accompanying the poem, is a photograph of a 1907 postcard of Farndon, by Peter Morrell, which sees both the majestic river Trent, and the old Britannia Inn, which is now a pleasant gastro-pub called, the Riverside. The banner picture, I thought just as apt, as Farndon is a well known docking port for local and non-local boat goers. I hope that you enjoy the poem, I hope that you both enjoy your long walks, and can sort out any familial grievances you may have, and as always, please do stay safe everyone.
- Category: Reflection
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Comments3
Beautiful scenery set with great images. A feeling of peace pervades this poem
Thanks for the read and for such lovely praise sorenbarrett, it is very much appreciated.
I hope that all is well.
Beautiful
Thanks for the read Tony36, and for your short, but overwhelmingly kind comment, it is very much appreciated.
I hope that all is well.
You're welcome, hope all is well with you
Walking in some villages can bring wonder and harmony to us Ben, as this one has with you.
Andy
Thanks for the read Andy, and I am glad that you are a fellow village venturer, who like me, enjoys such little adventures.
I hope that all is well.
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