Notice of absence from Cassie58
I am taking a break from poetry
I am taking a break from poetry
as long as trees do green their leaves in spring
and bluebells carpet woodland where we walk
as long as bird song trills for
you and i
and we are wrapped in soft silk pillow talk
gazing through the skylight at the moon
our audience a wealth of spangled stars
my admiration holds no height or depth
it wanders in the blue sky that is ours
for you the holder of my beating heart
protector of my shadow
at all times
for me no snow capped mountain is too high
for you the rock face surface i would climb
one glance across a room you meet my eyes
returned is love eternal as the tides
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Author:
Cassie58 (
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Comments12
Incredibly beautiful dearest Cassie, 🌹
Thank you so much dear Teddy. 🌹
A fine write Cassie.
Thank you Orchi. Pleased you enjoyed.
As usual you have so eloquently expressed feelings of love and tenderness in this piece
Thank you so much for your encouraging words sorenbarrett. I appreciate you.
A beautiful
love poem, 💕
superb imagery!!
Floats like a gentle stream,
penned mellifluously! 🎵🎶🎶
Best wishes 🙏 🤞 🌹 Thad
Thank you for sharing poetess!👍
Thank you so much Thad for your encouragement.
This is boundless love in beautiful verse, it takes the breath away. Perfect Cassie!
Dear Bella, thank you so much for your lovely review. 🌹
I remember this after two ex-wives, still a pleasant one. Nice.
Thanks for the smile Dan. I appreciate the visit.
Wonderful loving words Cassie, may that love never die.
Andy
Thank you Andy for a lovely comment. I appreciate you.
Very lovely poem )) beautiful and gentle words
Thank you Caring Dove for your kind words.
amazing poem stunning
your talent just flows when you write
words are beautiful keep writing xxx
Dear Jim thank you so much for your encouragement and support. Hope you are having a good weekend. All the best.
hi Cassie enjoyed poem it is so beautiful
your talent is totally amazing you should be so proud
its nice to talk to such a talented writer
keep writing xxx godbless
You are so kind Jim. Thank you.
Beautiful mature love words. True love is hard to find, but once found it's there for life.
Your poem made my heart beat Cassie. Thank you.
Dear Saleh, thank you so much for your lovely comment. So pleased you enjoyed this piece. I hope you have a great weekend. All good wishes.
Beautiful. Tremendous work.
Thank you so much for your kind review Thomas.
I have just lost the note I left here .. but want to reiterate, when the bar needs to be set, you sure set it high my friend .. Kindest .. Neville
Thank you so much Neville. Nice response.
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