Vision

sorenbarrett

I can see farther in the darkness than in the light
two million light years to the farthest star at night
With the scales of the sun over my eyes I see two miles
vision dimed by light's golden tiles 

  • Author: sorenbarrett (Online Online)
  • Published: August 26th, 2024 05:27
  • Comment from author about the poem: The light of education, religion, philosophy often blinds us from seeing the truth
  • Category: Unclassified
  • Views: 112
  • Users favorite of this poem: Cassie58, Teddy.15, Qurrat Al Ain
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  • Mutley Ravishes

    I never thought of it that way. Thanks, Soren, and so poetically put.

    • sorenbarrett

      Thanks for the review and comment

    • orchidee

      A fine write SB.
      Erm, does the No.7 bus got to Outer Space? What is the timetable?! lol.

      • sorenbarrett

        Thanks Orchi yes but it only comes once in a millennium, hope you don't mind the wait

        • orchidee

          It may not seem such a long wait as Goldfinch and I are millions of years old, so we say!

        • Cassie58

          Absolutely true . A most interesting outlook and much appreciated by this star gazer. Very nicely conveyed sorenbarrett. Things much close to home can certainly be hidden from us.

          • sorenbarrett

            Thank you Cassie for the read and review as always it is deeply appreciated

          • Teddy.15

            How beautiful kudos dearest sorrenbarret 🌹

            • sorenbarrett

              Thank you Teddy for reading this flash of thought. Your remarks are as always too kind

            • Thad Wilk

              Short and succinct
              a great read indeed! 👍
              Awesome rhyme and flow
              and a treat to read! 😁
              Best regards ✌️ Thad

              • sorenbarrett

                Thanks Thad I appreciate the read and most kind comments

              • Bella Shepard

                It is true that we are often blinded by the light, but when our eyes are allowed to adjust to the dark it is amazing how much more we are able to comprehend. Wisely said my friend, and beautifully presented.

                • sorenbarrett

                  Thanks so much Bella I truly appreciate the read and comment. I believe we are often blinded by the light and after a while we do see better.

                • Thomas W Case

                  Tremendous work.

                  • sorenbarrett

                    Thank you so much Thomas

                  • Goldfinch60

                    Such true words soren, in the darkness we can see forever.

                    Andy

                    • sorenbarrett

                      Thank you Andy for the read and interpretation.



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