The days crawl by like
tortoises.
My purpose is obscured by
vodka nights, and
raven-haired sadness.
Naked branches of
the maple trees dance in
the autumn wind, and
leaves rustle in
the dead grass;
all burnt orange and yellow ocher.
They're like a
little surreal sunrise.
Hope
is eternal.
- Author: Thomas W Case (Pseudonym) ( Offline)
- Published: August 28th, 2024 13:31
- Comment from author about the poem: My book, Seedy Town Blues Collected Poems is available on Amazon.com and my limited edition book, Rise Up Collected Poems and Short Stories is available on Booksie.com.
- Category: Unclassified
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- Users favorite of this poem: Teddy.15, Qurrathul Ain
Comments9
A fine write T.
Thank you.
Beautiful images Thomas
Thanks.
Hope and this wonderful glymps of Autumn, my fave season. 🌹 🍂
My favorite season too, sweet Teddy. Thank you.
Great write
Thanks.
You're welcome
"clapping" 👏
Great read,
mesmerizing imagery
and wonderful
use of metaphor!! 👍
My pleasure to read today! 😊
Best regards ✌️ Thad
Thank you, Thad.
Fine words Thomas.
Andy
Thanks.
A great write, Thomas. And the last line hits it out of the park.
Thanks, Tom. Much appreciated.
I enjoyed my visit!! Great poem!
Thank you.
ty
Beautiful. Very nice writing.
Thank you.
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