Can you tell that I cried ?
Mourning your lost time
Realizing what you have been through
All your childhood was cruel
Can you get out of your castle?
The king should declare the right
The palace should be for the night
In the morning you fight
Can you tell that I smiled?
When you opened up your inside
Like the sea you had your secrets
You buried them and sealed them
Can you tell how much I love you ?
You are the best in your show
The views are pretty low
Yet you shine like a pro
Can you tell I search you face ?
In every family gathering you are hidden
You are silenced for a reason
They damage your inner, causing you fever
Can you tell we make the best team?
When you ask about my day
Time stops and we ramble
You make the best brother
Can you tell they are to blame?
They are the disgrace of the world
Don't disappear into the big crowds
You have been a diamond then and now
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Author:
Neilton (
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- Comment from author about the poem: Summer break Is over ahhh but here is a poem I wrote during the summer ! This poem is about my favourite person in the whole world,my brother who is going through a hard time and I want to be by his side every day but that's not always possible! I hope one day he realizes his worth!
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Comments5
Excellent write
Thank you so much!
You're welcome
This poem is notable as much for what it doesn't say than what it does. And that is right and proper. But many many folks don't get the best start in life for a wide variety of reasons, and I see this as a support for them as well as your brother.
Thank you very much for your kind words!
You are absolutely right I just wish there was a way I could just take his pain away ! It\'s devastating seeing him like that.Thanks again for your comment!
Really love the bond your share with your brother
Thanks a lot for your comment! Our bond is truly unique
And a diamond this is. Very nice.
Wow! Thank you so much !
Sounds like your brother is lucky to have you as a brother. Great write.
*sister ! I'm his sister haha ! But that's okay cause my pseudonym is a little confusing! My real name is Dorothea! Thank you so much for your kind words! I truly appreciate it!
Oh, that's funny. Lol.
Then I mean, he's lucky to have a sister like you. Lol
Thank you very much!!
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