Moon my beloved:
The waterlily whispers;
For there are shining,
Twinkling stars,
Still you're lonely,
Lonelier than me.
In your light,
Lies my solace
For you know me well,
My beloved
For my loneliness
You have loveliness
For your somberness
I have divine radiance.
For you know the truth,
The truth of my ethereal love.
For your beauty of eternity,
Nothing else is breathtakingly pretty
I love you beyond measure
I love you behind pleasure
For your beloved is lonely,
In the waters of tranquility
For your alluring loveliness,
I thank you my beloved.
For my floating beauty,
You have the silvery glow of serenity
For your light of love in darkness,
Nothing else radiates bright.
I love you my beloved,
Moon, my beloved.
For there are shining,
Twinkling stars,
Still you're lonely,
Lonelier than me.
In your light,
Lies my solace
For you know me well,
My beloved
For my loneliness
You have loveliness
For your somberness
I have divine radiance.
For you know the truth,
The truth of my ethereal love.
For your beauty of eternity,
Nothing else is breathtakingly pretty
I love you beyond measure
I love you behind pleasure
For your beloved is lonely,
In the waters of tranquility
For your alluring loveliness,
I thank you my beloved.
For my floating beauty,
You have the silvery glow of serenity
For your light of love in darkness,
Nothing else radiates bright.
I love you my beloved,
Moon, my beloved.
- Salvia.S
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You might do well, and also enjoy, reading Sir Phillip Sydney's love sonnets...to the moon. Her name is Cynthia. That's a hint.
Lovely and romantic love song, bittersweet and so sweetly detailed with a delicate poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
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My comments on the poem “Love letter from waterlily to her beloved moon” by Salvia S
“Still you're lonely,
Lonelier than me.
(…)
For you know me well,
My beloved
For my loneliness…”
The poem speaks of the loneliness of both the moon and the poetess. Though the moon is surrounded by myriads of stars, it is still lonely. Just as humans are surrounded by millions like them but are still lonely. Solitude and loneliness often form the tapestry on which poets write to express their deep thoughts. Soman Ragavan. 24.11.2024
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