from what i what i write you probably think my life is sad and dark
that i never leave my room or go walking in the park
my life is not all sad and rain i speak on what i know
i know a lot of bad and pain but rain is what helps grow
i speak online of what i know because you have no name
my life is just a tv show a tv show of shame
no face to put on to my work no way that you could find
that when i put the keyboard down im really pretty kind
i do not bring my dark to life i just bring it to you
and inside my life i only show this to a tiny few
dont want too keep these feelings down dont want dry them out
these are things that others just dont want to talk about
my life is not all sad and gloomy i swear that this is true
but dark is what you know of me and i do not know you
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Mr,apocalapse (Pseudonym) (
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- Comment from author about the poem: basicly what im saying these are my poems are my feelings that i dont want to show the world but i know i have to tell someone so while all you may know me is for my thoughts you dont know me for my spirit so even though i may seem sad and dark that is just a tiny part of me that you get to see
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That's part of the reason many of us likely took to this genre of art, since socially we're NOT allowed to say what's really within us. Yet only letting our fellows here know leaves the misimpression we're fundamentally miserable. Perhaps we are?! I've learned that when I'm most deeply pressed either with joy or grief, I cannot put it into my work. These are only shadows of what is. Beautifully expressive. Thank you for sharing.
thank you for taking the time to not only read but interpret what im trying to say. and doing a good job at it!
I relate.. we all are but rain drops in a storm.
lol thank you
Beautifully stated I love the line about how the rain makes the grass grow. It is adversity that gives us strength. A beautiful message contained in this poem and wisdom beyond years.
thank you very much
Wow. You have definitely been reading my mail. I would be happy to sign my name to this. Good work!
what does that mean ive been reading your mail lol nd thank you
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