Bricks of hope

sorenbarrett

Brick by brick science’s logic is laid
In the mind of the poet all is made of hope
Religion, air castles for what is prayed
All come to the same end of the rope

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  • Teddy.15

    My impression is anything is possible šŸŒ¹

    • sorenbarrett

      Thank you Teddy yes anything is possible. So appreciate the read and comment friend

    • Doggerel Dave

      Precisely - 'the same end'
      Faved for its truth and concision.
      That's poetry, Soren.

      • sorenbarrett

        Thanks Dave I appreciate the continued reads and comments. I am am always checking for a new poem of yours.

        • Doggerel Dave

          Dried up for the moment.......

        • Cassie58

          So much truth in this brevity sorenbarrett. My father was a scientist. I guess I have been influenced by him, but for sure we are all going to die one day. No escape from that.

          • sorenbarrett

            Thank you Cassie for the support and kind words.

          • orchidee

            KP's at the end of her rope, or tether - she's out of botox! lol.

            • sorenbarrett

              Thanks Orchi for the read, Get a longer rope

            • Goldfinch60

              May that rope pull us all up into a better life soren.

              Andy

              • sorenbarrett

                Thank you Andy for the words of hopefulness and support.

              • Tom Dylan

                Such an intriguing short poem. Nicely done. Cheers, Tom.

                • sorenbarrett

                  Thanks so much Tom for the review and most kind words

                • Thad Wilk

                  šŸ‘šŸ‘
                  Two thumbs up
                  you get from me!! šŸ˜€
                  Very evocative and
                  penned superbly!! šŸ’Æ
                  Best regards āœŒļø Thad

                  • sorenbarrett

                    Thank you Thad for the read and kind words. As always thy are appreciated

                  • Demar Desu

                    What is the end of the rope

                    • sorenbarrett

                      Each will have to take that as they wish either all have value or all mean nothing. Depends if your climbing the rope to safety of hanging by the neck from it.

                      • Demar Desu

                        Iā€™m asking you what is your end of rope, you seem to see things so clearly. Can you see the finish line?

                        • sorenbarrett

                          Death is one finish line, I don't know if there is another

                          • Demar Desu

                            Fair



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