Your calming song
Reactions over actions in my dreams,
always repetitively misguiding it seems,
tricking me into forgetting what is true,
these days when I review you my you.
Actions from the reactions show me you,
show me what remains in my view,
show me the memories I dearly hold,
bring forward the ones misplaced and old.
Reviewing is now my go to thing for you,
the love I have for you is end of time true.
We were meant to never be apart for long,
death silenced your heartbeats calming song.
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Author:
Maplespal (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: September 8th, 2024 05:17
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Comments2
Loss and missing the departed remains the theme in this poem. Nicely written
Aww, I am at a loss for words! This is so heartbreaking! You're killing me! I cannot go there with my father or my mother, for it kills me. Oh, how gently you frame a heartwrenching reality which haunts hour after hour interminably, the subtly growing poignancy driving the facts into place with that perfect conclusion. Thank si very much for sharing.
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