Longing (Senryu)

rrodriguez

Eyes met in longing

Their lips touched passionately

hearts started to soar

  • Author: rrodriguez (Offline Offline)
  • Published: September 8th, 2024 14:37
  • Comment from author about the poem: Trying another poetic format to write poetry.
  • Category: Love
  • Views: 20
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  • Cheeky Missy

    Methinks the definition is senryu, sister to the haiku, but with a different set of topics which this beauty seems to fit beautifully. Thank you for sharing.

  • rrodriguez

    Thank you for your observation. Haiku deals with nature and senryu deals with human nature. I'll correct it.



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