Death, something I sometimes fear
Death, something I sometimes want
Death, must be better than this here
Death, something that gives me daunt
I know, true in my heart, I deserve
Death, as my life I’ve screwed up
Maybe in hell the devil I should serve
For some girls I must have with a breakup
Death, something so desirable now
Death, I can’t see why people fear
Death, the answer to any broken vow
Death, it’s inevitable, and it’s always near
People need to know, that death is good
It’s the answer to all your problems
It’s basically your brotherhood
Or you have to travel more angstroms
Life, it may seem like glory and great
Life, it’s the place where you can be in pain
Life, it goes up and down, never straight
Life, it will never be the same
Too many people trying to rise to power
Everyone intent on money and fame
Some people can’t even take a shower
And when they die, no one feels the shame
Life, such a helpless state
Life, you could die anytime
Life, why not be prepared and accept your fate
Life, it’s full of loss, agony and crime
I hate to say it; we live in a terrible place
It’s falling apart as to power people climb
Everyone too focused on having a pretty face
It’s breaking to pieces; I’d rather face the end of my time
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Author:
LP2187 (
Offline) - Published: September 9th, 2024 11:40
- Comment from author about the poem: I promise I'm not suicidal... If you read my last poem 'Purpose' then you understand the second stanza. And I do want to die. I don't know why. I deserve death.
- Category: Reflection
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what did you do to deserve death?
my life has too many problems eg. anxiety ptsd anger issues and self harming. the world would benefit if i died. i mean it would've been better if I wasn't born. i have no friends. everyone hates me at school. they think i'm a freak (i am a freak). kill me.
from a fellow freak--you're my friend. and you don't deserve death--they do those jerks.
I've never had anyone tell me that... Thank you very much. Maybe I shouldn't kill myself.
you shouldn't.. I've tried and its overrated--i regretted it instantly.(the anxiety that comes with an attempt is a lot) you're needed here-plus it's fun to fall in love with life (bc screw people) but it's the little things you know; writing letters to yourself, going for walks in the rain, taking a nap
the healing journey--is not easy. and I'm still on it and I've been on it for like two years I dunno, it's not always quick. and it's certainly not painless. but it feels good to be able to sleep at night
But I hate life. It's the place you can feel pain and oh that's from my poem but I feel scared all the time but I don't know why. I guess it's good to love life but how can I when I hate everything. Also why are we friends? I'm just bringing all my problems into your life. :YHUDSgfyhsughsjihgfshuehgfshijhbdj lishdbsjkwqlshsjiihbjsihhbsnijhnskdohsjhfvjsijdhjdcksxjnsjkhbnksdfohnm,KiIKlaLkJHHIKJgHYRHFJDKEWHGEJSIHRWSQKLWHBJNKMDWFHEWMKDLFJNWD,LHNKFEWMBJNEWMIHBFQSWKPBIJNMKFDJBGJMEKOIJGNEWKJHBEWKMFHENENKMDALNJHBFWMEKFHEWKDOFJWMHEWMJWMWMKWMKHEWMHEWKDOHEQWKHEHEMHEWKHEWMHEWMGXFHX crap i broke my laptop
if you don't want to be my friend you don't have to. but I mean the fear you feel is valid--especially if its from ptsd. I feel like something people don't understand is regular anxiety is like "what if this could happen, then we'd be screwed!" and anxiety from ptsd is like "this already happened and oh shoot it could happen again I'm screwed because its more likely to happen" if that makes sense lol. do you truly hate everything? do you hate life or do you hate living in a constant state of pain?
You’re right, I’m sorry.
Death is not good - not usually. Except maybe for an end to painful illness, etc.
Meanwhile, dark humour - me being daft - 'Ooohh, not suicide; it will be bad for your health!' (heehee). And so will my corny jokes.
Yeah I have dark humour too
Great write
Not it’s not
You're welcome
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